Thursday - the shot of you taking the pills needs to be cropped - you are a bit distant The be brave sign is s till a bit too subtle. You don't understand its significance as a spectator. The ladder scene is still far too long - do we really need so much footage here? Also it still needs foleys to be attached - hearing the ladder being pulled down. The last foley of you falling down the stairs needs reworking - it doesn't sound very realistic and needs a thump as someone hits the floor.
Thursday - the shot of you taking the pills needs to be cropped - you are a bit distant
ReplyDeleteThe be brave sign is s till a bit too subtle. You don't understand its significance as a spectator.
The ladder scene is still far too long - do we really need so much footage here? Also it still needs foleys to be attached - hearing the ladder being pulled down.
The last foley of you falling down the stairs needs reworking - it doesn't sound very realistic and needs a thump as someone hits the floor.