The build up to Halloween is a spooky time for everyone, but Clara has every reason to be worried. Clara is a girl who has a rather vivid imagination, which unfortunately links in with her love of all things horror.
AS she goes through her day to day life things take a turn for the worse, simple games of hide and seek turn into running away from a murderer, dinner time becomes rather cannibalistic and a few uninvited guests appear when they really shouldn't. Clara's older sister Daisy is taking care of her whilst their parents are away on holiday. so its up to Daisy to keep Clara safe. But as Clara believes she has escaped the worst, things that go bump in the night aren't necessarily in her imagination.
Ok - the general idea is fine. We need the detail now - still no animatic? Still no details of what is required for each scene. No planning detail - permissions, images of where, costume, props, risk assessment, experiments. There isnt much to show for 4 weeks work is there. You are way off a level 4 with this - more like a level 2 I am afraid which you should not settle for. You have to really start to put some flesh on this if you want to avoid a very disappointing mark.
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